Doing short story critiques for class is painful. Neither of these even really have a plot, and they don’t have characters who change at all so discussing anything in them is pointless since it all builds up to absolutely nothing at the end.
Like, I can’t discuss how to improve random craft stuff if there’s nothing to build it up to. At the end of one a character falls asleep after talking to his parents about nothing and in the other a guy writes some poems after meeting a manic pixie dream girl. There literally isn’t enough content there to write two pages of craft discussion on them.
Have you ever seen something completely baffling but also technically excellent? I can’t believe how well this person edited Jane into Treasure Planet so she and Captain Amelia could fight the bad guy from Osmosis Jones. “Man,” I say to myself, “I could never make this bizarre music video about beloved animated characters becoming ghosts.”
After seeing that Episode with Toph…how can i not do something.
(Dont take what i say seriously its just my opinion is all)
Toph shows who is still the most badass of them all, I am convinced the only reason she was not in the other books is cause you know toph could have kicked every villians ass with a stomp of her foot Lol. One thing im glad about is her personality hasnt changed even though shes old now and doesnt give two shits about korras problems…or smacking her around.